domingo, 13 de noviembre de 2011

Argumentative essay

Adopt a homeless dogs is the best option to get a dog.

1Introduction
Hook: There are around two millions of homeless dogs in Mexico City and the number is increasing quickly,
Connecting information Dogs have been with us for 12000 years. They have been or loyal furry friends
Thesis statement:
If you are thinking about having a dog why instead of buying a dog you adopt a dog? There are lots of clichés about homeless dogs like.
1. Homeless dogs are ugly and all of them are mutt.  à  , thousands of dogs are abandoned by their owners every year.
2. Homeless dogs have serious sickness that can be spreader to your family. à You'll get a healthy pet       
5.it is better to buy a puppy in a pet shop because you can choose an specific puppy àYou won't be supporting puppy mills
Conclusion:
There are more reasons that you have to consider in the moment to get a dog.
Pattern 3
    
To Adopt a homeless dogs is the best option to get a dog.

There are three millions of homeless dogs in Mexico City and the number is increasing quickly. This is a shame because they have been our loyal furry friends for around 12000 years.. If you are thinking about having a dog why instead of buying a dog you adopt a dog? There are lots of clichés about homeless dogs that would be denial.
Many people think that all homeless dogs are ugly and mutt. This happens because people do not give themselves the opportunity to meet the dogs of the kennels or dog shelters; they just follow the stereotype of homeless dogs. But actually this is a misunderstanding because thousands of dogs are abandoned by their owners every year and the vast majority of these dogs are dogs in good conditions and also cute.
Despite the fact that Homeless dogs of kennels or doghouses are mostly dogs abandoned; many people think that those dogs have serious sickness that can be spread to the adopter family. What they ignored is the fact that as we say before these dogs are abandoned so they are family dogs; also they ignored the fact that it would be a problem to have many sick dogs in kennel or dog shelters; all the dogs in these places are vaccinated, so you will get a healthy dog and also save money.
Also there are other people that argue that it is better to buy a puppy in a puppy mills because you can choose a specific puppy; this can be denial just saying that the characteristics that we have to take account are not just in physical appearance also in our own necessities, and homeless dogs have a wide range of abilities that people ignored. In the other hand if you adopted a dog instead of buying one you won’t be supporting puppy mills. Most of displaces have in impoverished conditions they just focus on physical appearance.

In fewer words to adopt a dog have a lot of advantages as you will save a life, you will get a healthy dog, you will save money, you would choose a dog base on your necessities not on their physical appearance, and you won’t be supporting puppy mills. But these are just a few of  the real amount of  advantages that there are but always keep in mind that A dog is the only thing on earth that will love you more than you love yourself" - Josh Billings


Sources
Se calcula que en México existe un perro abandonado por cada siete habitantes. Sólo en la capital, más de 3 millones de canes sobreviven como pueden en sus calles.”

Humans Brought Domesticated Dogs to New World More Than 12,000 Years Ago”




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